4Grammar and explanations
The layout of a formal letter
1. To whom, at the top: the office or position, the name, then танаа — Сууц өмчлөгчдийн холбооны дарга Б. Дорж танаа. 2. The heading, in the middle: Өргөдөл (application), Гомдол (complaint) or Хүсэлт (request). 3. Who you are: Би … амьдардаг / ажилладаг. 4. The problem: what is wrong, and since when. 5. The request: –хыг хүсье, –на уу. 6. The closing: Урьдчилан баярлалаа. Хүндэтгэсэн: your name, phone number and the date.
The request: –хыг хүсье
Put the action you want in the –х participle with the accusative, and end with хүсье, the formal first-person form of хүсэх ("I wish, I request"):
Халаалтыг яаралтай засаж өгөхийг хүсье.heating-ACC urgently repair-CONV give-PART-ACC wish-IMP"I request that the heating be repaired urgently."
The засаж өгөх chain (lesson 67) adds "for me": repair it for us.
Please: –на уу / –нэ үү
The present-future followed by the question particle is the polite request of official writing and of public signs: өгнө үү, ирнэ үү, хүлээнэ үү, явуулна уу.
Долоо хоногийн дотор хариу өгнө үү.week-GEN within answer give-PRES-FUT Q"Please reply within a week."
Засварчин явуулж өгнө үү.Please send a repairman.
Since: –снаас хойш
Since an event: the –сан participle with the ablative, then хойш. The vowel of –сан drops: эхэлсэн → эхэлснээс хойш, ирсэн → ирснээс хойш.
Халаалтын улирал эхэлснээс хойш радиатор халахгүй байна.Since the heating season began, the radiator has not been warming up.
Polite, formal and firm
| Too blunt | Polite and formal |
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| Засаарай! | Засаж өгнө үү. |
| Хариу өг! | Хариу өгнө үү. |
| Би засварчин хүсэж байна. | Засварчин явуулж өгөхийг хүсье. |
A good complaint states the facts, the date and one clear request. It does not accuse anyone: Saraa's advice, эелдэг боловч тодорхой, "polite but clear", is the whole art.
Go deeper in the grammar guide: Imperatives and polite requests · Politeness and address · Clauses built on –х